I completely agree
with what the argument is saying, and its intended purpose. I believe that ASU
should move towards e-Books and other electronic texts. The argument address
several key issues that I feel would be hard to provide effective
counterexamples too, or at least ones where the person would not be looking
like a money grubbing warmonger. One would be hard pressed to find more pieces
of information that would strength the argument given without adding in certain
aspects that might bog down the reader. The succinctness of the piece is one of
its best qualities. It simply goes out there, and just brings hard evidence
that even some of the simplest people can see is happening in the world today. For example if you walk down main street in suburban
USA you will most likely see a young child on an iPad or tablet and that young
child knows exactly how to work it, even sometimes better than the parent themselves.
The author makes the point to say that the few
people, who would be against this, would be those who are not comfortable with
this kind of technology and who are more familiar with hard copies of the text
and assignments. Now the author proposes a way to deal with them and that is to
simply continue to offer the hard copies of said text. I would propose to offer
the hard copies but to decrease the amount that is currently being produced.
Also he states that ASU can control what the publishers do, so if they do not
want to make any electronic versions of the text that is their business. But
ASU does control whom they do business so if said publishing house did not want
to do it, ASU could simply move on and look towards another publisher who is
willing to make e-Books.
Ethos is very
subtly put into this paper but the amount that is in it does a great deal of
justice for the author. Jo Donald, the author, makes the slightest nods towards
how great Arizona State is and how we are one of the best colleges. He also
makes the statement that ASU is one of the greenest colleges around and how if
we went electronic with some of our materials we would continue that trend and
might give other universities the push they need to become green as well.
It seems that
the writer uses a lot of testimonials and other type of quotes along those
lines. This seems to work for this type of article but it would have been nice
to see him use maybe a bit more logos in the writing, because I think some
people can only be persuaded by logic and numbers and not their emotions. I
also think that this type of assignment is very good for our next writing
assignment. To go along the lines of the
author to have a say in some sort of policy that ASU implements really allows
some people to make stronger arguments than say some has to make an argument on
steroid use in baseball and that person does not like sports.
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